ShatterTheSky22's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Elegant Elephant]

Great Start

I think the composition itself is pretty neat and the repeating patterns with slight changes are quite nice. I think throwing in a low chord every once in awhile wouldn't hurt, but you might just be going for a very quick and light piece and not want to throw it off with that. But it's just a suggestion for an otherwise great start.

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0KingZephyr0 responds:

Thanks for the suggestion! I really am lost as far as how I want to finish this, but I will consider what you said. Many thanks!

[Prescience]

First Attempt

Definitely not bad. Technically speaking, it's all right, and it sounds good. I think as melodies are concerned though, its very hard, at least for me, to latch on to any melody or pattern for the first minute until the background instrument kicks in, so it ends up sounding a bit random. Which could be what you're going for anyway. But if not, I might suggest a very low background instrument here, like a bass, playing something easily distinguished.
I think it's a pretty cool piece.

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AliceMako responds:

Glad you like it :3

The bassline actually forms the melody for the track, it plays the exact same riff
throughout and i only deviate from it in four short segments.

If i'd add an additional bassline the whole thing becomes even more cluttered
soundwise and i'd kinda lose the point of killing the beat, building up to the lead synth, so yeah, the first minute is probably a bit confusing as is ^_^;;

It's a good pointer though and i'll keep it in mind if i do something like this
again <3

[Arise (feat. Quarl)]

Beautifully Demented

Its been a long time since I've heard a song this disharmonious and odd, and yet it's perfect. Definitely haunting. And when it kicks into the heavier sections, it's flawless. One of my favorite songs. I apologize, I can't think of any constructive criticism. I thoroughly enjoyed it from start to end.

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Laqur responds:

thanks tsr :)

[Loving Affection]

Beautiful

I havent heard the original, but this is absolutely relaxing and pretty. I think the :37 instrument should have a slight filter or something on it, but that's just a matter of preference. It's mixed a little loud I think, but once the other instruments kick in, it's not as distracting. And the tempo increase section sounds wonderful.

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GamekrazzyProduction responds:

thanks for the review. And yeah, I guess it just might be a little loud... I am very glad you liked the song!!!

[[RA] - God Complex]

Very nice

I really enjoyed your more orchestral sections, and I think it's composed very well. I think the very quick triples on the piano don't quite fit though--seems a bit forced. And I think the main dubstep section around :24 is great, but I would have liked to hear a little more playing behind it, only because the pitch never gets very low, so it feels like its a bit hollow there. Otherwise I think it's a cool piece, and I love the name as well.

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DjRA88 responds:

Thanks for the suggestion, I'll work on adding in some tunes and update the submission

[B Chilled (2nd edition)]

Favorited

Absolutely a fan. It's very unique... jazzy, still rocking... Personally I would've placed this in the ambient section because of the way everything pretty much blends together into a background vibe at some points.
Sorry, I don't have any criticism, this piece pretty much nails it for me. And the distortion is right on. lol

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GodBlock responds:

:D Thanks man, to be honest this isn't my normal style but I've been away from my guitar for too long and thought I'd attempt something a little different I'm very happy with how the piece tuned out and I'm very happy you enjoyed it

EDIT::I've re-genred? the song to ambient maybe it fits better there :)

[(HoS) Cold- trial]

You have a lot of nice things in this.

It evolves nicely, and overall I think it's a great composition. Some of the transitions were perfectly smooth and others (2:59) are a bit too jarring, volume-wise for my taste. But it's an interesting piece no doubt and I enjoyed it.

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HonorOfStyle responds:

Thanks I'll try finishing it sometime. You should check back then!

[Ramblings in B]

To be honest,

I agreed with you at first about the distortion, but after about a minute, I've changed my mind. I think it's perfect. It's like a different instrument and vibe entirely, and I think it works excellently with the mellow background, which is filtered very well. And it loops amazingly.
Sorry I don't have any criticism, I really enjoyed it. Maybe add a little something to the percussion to change it up every once in awhile. But even thats a bit unnecessary probably.

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GodBlock responds:

Wow thanks :D

Im so glad someone enjoyed this :D

[=Lilium= [RMX]]

Amazing

Loved it. I think you should work on making your piano sounds a bit more realistic; maybe a bit more reverb or something (minus the ending ones which sound fitting). The percussion on this is beyond great. The quick snare and bass combos are really cool. And the dubwork is pretty good too.

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Daydream-Anatomy responds:

Good to hear:D
I was a little hesitant uploading it too soon since it was my first try at anything dubstep after watching some tuts on how to mess with LFO stuff for dubstep.

The piano is probably the weakest part of this, I used a lil reverb, and the sound goodizer on a really low setting.

Thanks.

[One (Your Name)]

Great sound

It has a very futuristic "Terminator"-like sound to it, which is awesome. I think it's a bit unfulfilled though without either some heavy bass sounds thrown in, or some drum work. Maybe not both but just something to give it a bit more edge; it's very much in the higher pitch range the entire loop, and it sounds great, but it would be cool if it came down just once or twice. Cool piece!

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Dommshotz responds:

i cant find an honest heavy bass that doesnt kill kill the mood of the song...
i feel like the song is not done as it is...
thanks for the input